Showing posts with label Caption. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Caption. Show all posts

Tuesday, February 27, 2024

Barbara Shermund: Flirting at Sea

Let's begin with two very different captions appended to the same 1926 New Yorker cartoon by Barbara Shermund. The drawing is set on the deck of an ocean liner where a young flapper is flirting with a member of the crew. Here are the two captions, presented in alphabetical order. Which of these is the better caption?
"I suppose you seafaring men just love the ocean"
"Oh, I don't know.  It's changed so lately."



Or:
"Now tell me all about the engines!"


That first one is the somewhat cumbersome two-speaker type of caption that predominated American cartoons at the time of The New Yorker's founding in 1925. It's essentially two lines of dialogue where the first serves as the setup and the second is the punch line. The second caption is the more modern single-speaker caption that was just starting to come into its own. It was soon to be championed by Peter Arno and eventually every cartoonist at this magazine and others.

Both of these distinct captions are authentic period creations. The curious thing is that the shorter, punchier caption is Shermund's own, handwritten on her original drawing. The longer, more antiquated, and somewhat stilted caption somehow replaced it between the drawing's submission and its publication in The New Yorker. Who wrote it and why was it deemed superior to the artist's original caption? What was the editorial reasoning here? Ninety-eight years have passed. It's likely we'll never know.
"Now tell me all about the engines!"
Published as "I suppose you seafaring men just love the ocean"
"Oh, I don't know.  It's changed so lately."
Barbara Shermund
Original art
The New Yorker, August 28, 1926, page 21


The original art was sold on eBay just last month.
Detail of the two speakers

Barbara Shermund's signature

Detail with another couple

"Now tell me all about the engines!"

Detail of the seafaring man with a big neck

Detail of the flapper

The publication date

Rush

Barbara Shermund 
eBay listing ended January 19, 2024

Barbara Shermund 
eBay item description


"I suppose you seafaring men just love the ocean"
"Oh, I don't know.  It's changed so lately."
Barbara Shermund
The New Yorker,
 August 28, 1926, page 21


"Now tell me all about the engines!"
Published as "I suppose you seafaring men just love the ocean"
"Oh, I don't know.  It's changed so lately."
Barbara Shermund
Original art
The New Yorker, August 28, 1926, page 21


Cartoons by Eldon Kelley and Barbara Shermund

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Eldon Kelley's cartoon on the page opposite Shermund's is another plodding example of the two-speaker gag. It would work just as well or better with only the artist's response. That's what a century of hidsight will tell you.
Old Man:  What d'you call that, young woman?
Artist:  That's Love in Spring!  What did ya think it was?

Eldon Kelley
The New Yorker, August 28, 1926, page 20


March 8, 2025 Update:  Today's Ink Spill by Michael Maslin reports that Barbara Shermund's drawing was reused in the magazine as a spot illustration four years later. This is a rare and possibly unique example of the repurposing of a drawing in The New Yorker.





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Saturday, August 6, 2022

Joe Dator: Catching the Cliche

Joe Dator's cartoon for The New Yorker issue of March 29, 2021 takes an idiom we've all heard and somehow turns it into something unexpected. This is one of the reasons—there are many others—I am perpetually fascinated by cartoons and the people who create them. It's not everybody who can look at a cliche with fresh eyes.

The original art has a caption which differs slightly from that of the published drawing. The artist explains the reason for this in the listing which appeared on eBay in January of this year.






Joe Dator
eBay listing ended January 9, 2022
Joe Dator
eBay item description









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Sunday, February 14, 2021

William Steig: A Proposal

William Steig's original cartoon for The New Yorker of December 6, 1958 has been listed by bookseller James Cummins with the caption "Sandra, my happiness is in your hands." Perhaps that's what's written on the original, or perhaps it's a transcribing error, but in either case it isn't the full published caption, which reads, "Sandra, my whole life's happiness is in your hands." That's much better, or at least more earnest, and it may reveal the guiding editorial hand of The New Yorker. The original can be yours, or your Valentine's, for a grand.

"Sandra, my happiness is in your hands."
William Steig
Original art
Published as "Sandra, my whole life's happiness is in your hands."
The New Yorker, December 6, 1958, page 45



William Steig
James Cummins, Bookseller listing accessed February 13, 2021



"Sandra, my happiness is in your hands."
William Steig
Original art
Published as "Sandra, my whole life's happiness is in your hands."
The New Yorker, December 6, 1958, page 45



"Sandra, my whole life's happiness is in your hands."
William Steig
The New Yorker, December 6, 1958, page 45



Cartoons by Dana Fradon and William Steig
There's also the tail-end of a Talk piece on caricaturist Al Hirschfeld.



Note:  Original art by William Steig often goes beyond the traditional bounds of gag cartoon humor to say something meaningful about life itself. Images of his original art are something I'm happy to post here on Attempted Bloggery. Reader submissions of scans or photos are welcome.



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Sunday, July 24, 2016

Repeated Random Caption Contest Blues

You've seen the warning. Are you sure you want to resubmit this form. What form? Where? Sometimes you're in a browser you haven't seen for months open to an unknown page. For some reason you click yes. What could happen? Then you realize what you did. Your caption for Contest #519 by Tom Toro is inadvertently submitted to Contest #530 by Peter Kuper.  Oops.

In the Hollywood screenplay version of my life, when I commit a serious error like this, serendipity abounds. Unanticipated shades of meaning turn a mediocre caption from one contest into a sublimely-nuanced triple entendre in another and I am happily swept into finalist status for the first time. The whole town joins in my celebration. Restaurants offer me free champagne brunches and "Hamilton's" producers ask how many tickets they should send me.

The reality though is a bit different. The old caption, barely serviceable in the earlier contest, is utterly senseless in the new one. Simply put, this is not how the screenplay is supposed to go. Get me Rewrite!




Note:  Remember, only you can prevent Caption Contest mishaps.

This is Peter Kuper's first appearance on the blog. Sorry, Peter. It was all one big mistake.

Quick links to this blog:

Cartoon Caption Contests
Attempted Bloggery's serendipitous index

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Friday, May 29, 2015

My Entry in the New Yorker Cartoon Caption Contest #476

Here is my entry in the New Yorker Cartoon Caption Contest #476 for May 25, 2015. The drawing is by Benjamin Schwartz.


"You need to be more grounded."



I played with a lot of captions this week.
"Isn't it time you left your guilt behind too?"
"With one exception, you've made a lot of progress."
"When I said talking about it won't kill you, it was a figure of speech."

"When I said talking about it won't kill you, I didn't know you were in the Mafia."
"You've finally acknowledged your own mortality."
"There's no longer any point to thinking outside the box."
"When did you first feel they were out to get you?"
"I trust you're not taking my last payments to the grave."



June 1, 2015 Update: The Finalists




June 22, 2015 Update:  Winning Caption



Note: Last week, Frank Cotham sent a limousine around to the cave. My caption was made from stone knives and bearskins. See the primitive results of Contest #475.

Benjamin Schwartz cartoons: Yeah, we've got that.

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Tuesday, May 26, 2015

Matthew Diffee's Hand Drawn Joke Caption Contest

New Yorker cartoonist Matthew Diffee's brand new book is called Hand Drawn Jokes for Smart Attractive People. He promoted this book with a one-off caption contest. Here's my personal entry, with apologies to those of you who thought this was a high-class blog.


"No, I said take out the trash."


Hand Drawn Jokes for Smart Attractive People by Matthew Diffee

Matthew Diffee

Hand Drawn Jokes for Smart Attractive People by Matthew Diffee






An Evening at the Moth:  Matthew Diffee



June 5, 2015 Update:  It occurs to me that I didn't get my caption quite right. I should have said, "No, it's the trash I asked you to take out." It's still crude, but at least my intention is clear.

Note:  After you've ordered a copy or two, check out my earlier blog posts about Matt Diffee.

My entire two-year history of trying to figure out Caption Contests is right here for the browsing. No, I haven't found the skeleton key.

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